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明天机考，i ue，argu求拍，帮忙估计一下这样的作文值四分吗（就这么点追求~）
TOPIC: ISSUE29 - Public figures such as actors, politicia , and athletes sho
uld expect people to be interested in their private lives. When they seek a pu
blic role, they should expect that they will lose at least some of their priva
WORDS: 640 TIME: 0:45:00 DATE: 2006-7-24
Public figures, which usually a ear as succe ful people in various fields, a
ttract curiosity of lots of people about their private lives, and on the other
hand, they are nece ary to expose some of their privacy to keep being famous
. Thus, should they expect to lose their privacy, e ecially on something emba
rra ing or awful? In my point of view, they certainly have the rights to defe
nd their privacy, which is also their human nature.
The reason why people are so interested in public figures' private lives, perh
a is that they are ones that ordinary people are dreaming of to be. People u
sually show great interests about these figures, and are interested in everyth
ing about them. Besides their wonderful performance in their profe ional fiel
d, people want to know more about what they look like in daily lives? If a fan
of Michael Jordan finds that when Jordan is sleeping, he ores, probably thi
s fan ores, too. Then, he might be very proud about his oring at sleep, an
d do not feel embarra ed when some other mentio that, for Jordan ore as w
ell. People tend to find something in common with their idols, and as a result
, they love these idols more, or sometimes modify their behaviors or habits.
As for the public figures, they have the demand to keep being famous, which en
courage them to expose some of their privacy to the public, in order to attrac
t more. As mentioned above, ordinary people are interested in public figures'
lives, thus, these figures simply satisfy these curiosity. For one thing, a pu
blic figure who does not a ear on media, such as TV program, new apers or in
ternet, will soon disa ear from the sight of people, then, to prevent such ca
se, as we usually see in Hollywood, the stars tell the new aper something abo
ut their everyday lives, and that will help them not to disa ear from public.
For another, a ropriate exposure of their privacy can attract more people, a
dding points to their performance.
However, sometimes, the ma media together with their editors expose too much
privacy of public figures, which gives those succe ful people lots of pre u
re. Some public figures, e ecially for politicia , they want to be famous, a
nd also, they want to look perfect in the eyes of ordinary people. Therefore,
they will carefully and selectively expose their privacy, not to expose everyt
hing. While on the other hand, the journalist does not think so. Take a politi
cal leader for example, if the new aper tells to the public everything about
him, ranging from wearing a red suit to his quarrels with his wife last night,
although most of these small things have nothing to do with his job in govern
ment, yet they do have some influence even impact on his election campaign. Public figures are one of our human beings, thus we should re ect their choic
e, and if they want to keep something secret, those are human nature and human
rights that they obviously have. Privacy this word itself mea that someone
wants to be alone and free to be himself. To enjoy some privacy is no doubt hu
man nature, thus every one, including public figures should have their persona
l lives not being interrupted. Also, privacy is one of the human rights which
are written into Co titution, and government, and court have the duty to prot
ect one's right of privacy. If a TV program expose too much privacy which this
person would not want to be public, then, he have the right to ask for a stop
of this program. Human nature and Human rights drive him to do so.
In sum, to be a famous person sometimes is not that easy, it might require som
e sacrifice of one's everyday life. While when ma media do harm the privacy
of some public figures, it is their human nature and also human rights to say
TOPIC: ARGUMENT200 - Statistics collected from dentists indicate that three ti
mes more men than women faint while visiting the dentist. This evidence sugges
ts that men are more likely to be distre ed about having dental work done tha
n women are. Thus, dentists who advertise to attract patients should target th
e male co umer and emphasize both the effectivene of their anesthetic techn
iques and the se itivity of their staff to nervous or suffering patients.
WORDS: 452 TIME: 0:30:00 DATE: 2006-7-24
In this argument, the author claims that dentists who advertise to attract pat
ients should pay ecial attention to the male co umer as well as emphasize t
heir effectivene of techniques and se itivity of their staff. To su ort th
is claim, the author cites a statistic result. Close scrutiny of this argument
, I find it is based on several u u tantiated a umptio , which renders the
claim rather unconvincing.
Firstly, as to the statistics, which is the foundation of this claim, the auth
or shows little information about that, which makes it unwarranted. The argume
nt does not inform us, who conduct this survey, and how many dentists are invo
lved, and it also does not tell any information about how many dentists re on
d this survey. Lacking such information, it is entirely po ible that only thr
ee dentists took part in the survey, and after the survey only two of them res
ponded. If it is this case, the conclusion based on this statistic would be re
ally unconvincing.
Even if this statistic can represent most of the dentists, it doe 't mean the
fact that men faint three times more than women indicates men are more likely
to be distre ed about having dental work. There can be other reaso causing
this fact, perha the dentists pay le attention to this male co umer, or
the drugs used for men are different with that for women, which renders men to
faint more. Without ruling out or even co ider other factors, the author's a umption is rather doubtful, which prevent his claim from being credible.
Thirdly, the author indicates that dentists’ emphasize on their effectivene of techniques and the se itivity of their stuff will result in the succe o
f their advertisement, while on the other way, he provides i ufficient eviden
ce to su ort this indication. Perha it is the equipment that matters most w
hen a male patient chooses his dentist, or the location of the clinic of the d
entist. For that matter, the suggestion made by this author will can not help
be a poor advice.
Finally, the author falsely equates male patients to all the patients. Yet no
evidence is provided about that. Perha male patients only take a small part
in all the patients, perha in fact there are more female who do not usually
go to dentists. If it is this case, this recommendation will be a poor one and
do little help to dentists.
Above analyses show that the author's recommendation is based on several unwar
ranted a umptio or indicatio . To better su tantiate his claim, the autho
r should provide more information about the statistics, give sufficient eviden
ce that the effectivene of the dentists' techniques and the se itivity of t
heir stuff will attract male patient. Also, the percentage of male patients in
the whole is nece ary.
自我认定：
错别字问题比较严重（慌，手抖），一篇i ue大概错7个左右，刚刚argu居然写错了i u
fficient,靠，被电脑把give i ufficient evidence 认成 give *** evidence可就死的
i ue这篇例子太少了，有点紧张，另外自己准备的时候也没想出来有什么好例子。总不能
说张国荣因为舆论压力关于***而自杀，又不晓得考官对于男人那个什么态度，这种东西不
这两篇的字数是不是都太多了，晕了。居然写了640， 以前最多550：（
不管怎么样，再急也没啥用了。现在再看看前面写的了。水平停在这里了：（
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2006-2-16 发表于 2006-7-24 12:27
argument太摸版了,得不了高分。ISSUE字很多.
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2006-7-11 发表于 2006-7-24 12:37
练得太少了导致考试时间不足，argument现在就只能跟着模版的样子才写的完。
i ue分不行要靠argu来补，argu再不行就真的挺糟糕了
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2006-4-3 发表于 2006-7-24 12:38
那要怎么样才能得高分？ 我觉得A的语言还挺好的啊，表达的感觉也到位了
I比A稍稍逊色了一点，但字数很多啊
我比LZ菜多了，也马上就要考了，我还在挣扎着呢
A也没LZ写的好
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2006-7-11 发表于 2006-7-24 12:47
我真正备考时间只有两周，太少了：（ i ue的文字根本就没放在心上，没办法，什么好句子也背得很少（只好用狂用简单句，能说complicated就不说intricate），
考试的时候希望不要太慌：（
今天去查考试时间发现在中午11点，还好不要8：30，从来没这么早起过……
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2006-2-13 发表于 2006-7-24 12:58
我的错别字比楼主还严重，经常是知道这个字怎么屏，但是不两个字母顺序给打倒了
我认为这篇argue不能算很模版吧，这样都算模版，什么样才不是模版啊，请楼上说模版的帖个文章给我们看看，急
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2006-7-11 发表于 2006-7-24 13:08
我复习argu的时候看了很多范文，猴哥的和北美的那些，还有新东方的内参，ets的范文没看，不看了
可能无意识的就沿袭下来一些东西
的确感觉有点模版，不过到现在没搞清楚什么是模版，为此搞了很久ets如何鉴定***，结论是被判得人真的很倒霉……很可能是无意识的。
(爱的告别式)
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2006-3-23 发表于 2006-7-24 13:19
我也是明天考试.,早上8点半在北京的鼎钧 ,驻楼主好运~~~~加油
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我也是明天 考,11点在北京,祝大家好运!
梦想,忽近忽远!
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2006-2-16 发表于 2006-7-24 14:13
看好范文之后,我们要做的就是,独孤九剑.
不过既然楼主明天考,还是祝福你顺利~
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网络调查，希望女孩们踊跃投票，讨论
一个女人交了个新男友，他多次欲言又止，实际上就是想问个问题，你有过几个男人？这个问题，在时下流行的游戏“说实话”中，也会经常被提出来。被问到的女人，要么扯个谎，要么回答得模棱两可，经历的男人太多或太少，都是不愿意别人知道的。
而名门之后的洪晃姐姐可没那么多顾虑，在她的博客中，和女朋友们一起讨论起睡多少男人才值的问题，综合多种观点，结论如下：
0＝白活了
1＝亏
2到3＝传统
3到5＝正常
5到10＝够本
……
30到50＝过于开放
50以上＝完全瞎掰
看了这组数字，女人们觉得很有趣，男人们惊了，统计数字这个活动在几年前还是男人的专利呢。当今真是女人生猛呀！
如此数字排列，对“传统女性”，实在有提倡性解放的“振聋发聩”之功用！
的确,数字的力量是无穷的,它是如此无聊而又如此迷人，让人沉溺其中而不知所云，足以引导盲从的看客满足于对它的一度度“意淫”。 有时，数字是可怕乃至恐怖的，让人怵目惊心。试举三例： 例一：2004年杜蕾斯全球性调查报告向社会发布。引人注目的是报告中显示中国人的平均性伴侣数最多，为19．3人，远远高于全球的平均数10．5人；而中国人平均每年性生活的频率却只有90次，排全球倒数第7位，低于全球平均水平103次。杜蕾斯全球性调查称中国人的性伴侣为“世界之最”，该消息一经发布，舆论哗然。人们纷纷质疑这个调查结果的真实性。2005年11月8日，杜蕾斯照例公布了本年度全球性调查报告，中国人均性伴侣人数从去年的19.3个降到今年的3.1个，舆论再次哗然，质疑声不断响起。而在谈性依旧有点色变的中国，杜蕾斯的行为挑战的不仅仅是科学机构，更是隐藏在每个国人心中的性观念。 例二：德国一汽车杂志抛出惊人观点该杂志通过2253名年龄在20岁到50岁之间的男性驾车者进行的抽样调查，结果显示，驾驶德国宝马车的男性每周平均性生活次数为2.2次，频率最高，而驾驶宝时捷的男人每周平均性生活次数只有1.4次，频率最低。紧随宝马之后的是奥迪（2.1次）、大众（1.9次）、福特（1.7次）和梅塞德斯—奔驰（1.6次）。 国别分类进行的抽样调查显示，意大利轿车为2.0次，法国车1.9次，日本车1.8次，瑞典车1.6次和韩国车1.5次。但是，就女性驾车者而言，驾驶法国车的女性的性生活频率为最高，每周平均2.1次，驾驶宝马车的女性每周平均1.9次，而宝时捷又是最低，平均只有1.2次！ 例三：《扬名世界的狮城女郎钟爱宝》:“钟爱宝是个奇女子，世界上第一个女人，创下10小时内与90个男人251次***的世界记录。”（而这在网络红人流氓燕看来,“血淋淋的事实都不足以让中国人醒悟，跳楼又有什么意思呢？死也不能唤醒什么，不如痛快地做一回钟爱宝”。“她作为女性黑暗世界的一记闪电，已永久地刻在男人心上。”可见，其实流氓燕才是那位倡导“享受强奸”的女作家的“老师”。） …… 不能再举例了，否则，博主也会背上“教唆”的嫌疑！ 以上事例，已经足以说明国人对“数字”的热捧、迷信和情有独钟！那么，在这样一些“权威数字”的引诱下，你还有什么“禁固”不能解放？还有什么理由不能“及时行乐”？不管你如何纵欲放荡,你距离女性的极限,还差得远呢!----女人受到男人压制已经几千年了，现在是女权运动的春天，那么,请说说看，
女人一生要睡多少男人才算值?
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我还是觉得女人因该有一个性伴就好，别放弃5000年文化传统
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这问题好像没啥意思!!!
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不应用数量来衡量应注重质量，女人找男人就像在赌***，赌赢了，一次也就够了，所以女人要是遇到了个懂她、疼她的男人，一个也就足矣！:)
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我还是觉得女人因该有一个性伴就好，别放弃5000年文化传统
你自己就这么认为了，还发？
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我还是觉得女人因该有一个性伴就好，别放弃5000年文化传统
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偶觉得例一是杜雷斯刺激中国消费者的手段，不值得信
要知道杜雷斯是卖甚么的 晕
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偶觉得例一是杜雷斯刺激中国消费者的手段，不值得信
要知道杜雷斯是卖甚么的 晕
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发表于 2007-5-17 16:01:20
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全世界都知道的，你何必说出来:s36
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